Yes, I re-wrote the verses to make them more kid-friendly!
The song is by Carol Johnson, but while her lyrics in the choruses make for lovely hand motions, the beautiful verses she wrote do not make good hand motions. This causes the kids to lose interest during the verses.
So, I re-wrote words in the verses so the kids could do hand motions to them.
My music video shows the original chorus hand motions and the new verses hand motions which I re-wrote.
I hope you like it, and more importantly I hope this new version keeps your kids interested even during the verses!
I successfully added a Soundcloud player so you can listen to a whole group of songs under the Music & Video Tab. I also added some Youtube Videos of my music. This is what the Soundcloud player looks like: